Donnerstag, 26. Januar 2012


I looked at her
she stared back
our eyes met

no one looked away
I didn’t want to lose so I kept looking
I tried hard

I wanted to win this one time
Then I tripped,
I lost again. 



Again one of my (I don’t want to say poor but that’s what it probably is) writing attempts. This time in English and a rather short poem. So feel free to criticise.
(I couldn’t find any other matching pictures so just some random picture from a concert. I hope my brother's friend is okay with the fact that I used his eye. Hopefully I'll get away with those two pictures.) 

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